Business Plan & Pitch Deck Deep Review

Send me your deck or business plan at least 48 hours in advance. I'll review it in detail before the call, checking narrative flow, market sizing logic, unit economics, competitive positioning, and the specific slides/sections that tend to lose investors. In the session, we go slide-by-slide (or section-by-section for a business plan): what's working, what's missing, where the numbers don't hold up, and how to reframe weak points honestly rather than paper over them. You'll leave with a marked-up deck/plan and a prioritized fix list.

This is direct, specific feedback and I'll flag deal-math errors, internal contradictions, and unsupported claims the same way I would in my own fundraising materials.

Best for: founders 2-4 weeks from starting outreach, or who've gotten a few "no's" and want to know why.