
Send me your deck. I'll read it the way a sharp, sceptical reader would — looking for gaps in the commercial logic, the story arc, the positioning, and the investor-facing argument.
You'll receive a written memo before we speak. Not comments on slides — a proper document with a clear verdict on whether your story is landing, the 3–5 sharpest gaps in your narrative with specific fixes for each, what's genuinely working, and a focused agenda for our call.
The memo is the deliverable. The 30-minute call is where we work through it together.
Please book the call at least 3–4 business days after payment, to allow time for the memo to be delivered before we speak.
Who this is for: Pre-Seed to Series A founders who've been pitching and not getting the conviction they expected.
What I won't do: Redesign your slides, build your financial model, or soften what I find.
What this covers: This audit covers narrative logic and commercial story — not investor fit, market timing, or business model viability.
When you book: Upload your deck and answer the intake question. That's all I need to get started.