Essay Review

As an ex-writing mentor, my aim with this call will be to decode what's working/not with your essays. I will use several frameworks for this evaluation. By the end of the call, you should have a clear sense of:

1. Whether or not your response is adequately answering the prompt
2. Any structural gaps to be addressed
3. If your essay is properly reflecting your values, strengths, ambitions
4. Whether your essay set covers all worthy aspects of your profile
5. How you can better optimise your essay for the college you're applying to

Given the duration of this call, I'd recommend reviewing one set of essays per session (i.e., all essays related to one college) so that we can dive in properly. However, if time permits, I'd be happy to take a look at any other essays as well.