Essay Review for B-School Applications with Shivam Jha

Short Description

Detailed, honest feedback to make your MBA essays clearer, sharper, and more impactful.

Service Description

Your essays are often the single most important differentiator in a B-school application. This service is designed to help you refine your story, strengthen your narrative, and ensure your essays truly reflect who you are—not generic templates.

What this review includes:

1. ✍️ Content & Storyline Review
2. Clarity of thought, structure, flow, and overall coherence.
3. 🎯 Adcom Fit Check
4. Alignment with the school’s values, program goals, and essay prompt.
5. 🧠 Depth & Differentiation
6. Identifying weak spots, clichés, and missed opportunities to stand out.
7. 🔍 Specific, Actionable Feedback
8. Line-level comments and clear suggestions on what to improve and how.
9. ❌ Common Pitfalls
10. What to cut, reframe, or avoid based on real application insights.

What this is NOT

1. No rewriting your essay for you
2. No AI-generated content
3. Your voice stays yours. I help you sharpen it.

Best suited for

1. First drafts or revised drafts
2. Indian & global MBA programs
3. Candidates who want honest, no-sugarcoating feedback