MBA Essay Review

Your MBA essay should sound like you, not like an admissions consultant or an AI-generated template.

I will review two essays of up to 750 words and provide detailed comments on:

• The strength of your central story

• Structure and flow

• Clarity of your goals and motivations

• Personal differentiation

• School fit

• Examples, impact and specificity

• Areas that feel generic, repetitive or unconvincing

• Language, readability and overall authenticity

This service is suitable for applicants targeting LBS, HEC Paris, M7, and other leading US or European business schools.

You will receive written feedback and suggested directions for improvement. I will not write the essay for you because the final essay should remain entirely in your voice.