Personal Statement

Personal statements are hard because they ask you to be vulnerable and strategic at the same time. Most people either undersell themselves or sound like everyone else.

I'll give your personal statement a full editorial pass - not just grammar, but story arc, voice, opening hook, and whether the whole thing earns its ending. I'll also flag where you're being vague when you should be specific, and vice versa.

I've written personal essays for scholarships, leadership programs, and university applications and I've helped friends and peers sharpen theirs too.

What's included: Shared Google Doc with live feedback on it + strategic positioning of your story