SOP Review & Edit

Yasir Abbas

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SOP Review & Edit
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£12
60 mins

For master's applications, mostly your SOP is the only document in which the committee hears your voice. Most applicants waste it. They open with a childhood story, list their achievements in order, and close with generic ambition. The committee has read that exact statement a thousand times.

In this one-to-one session, we'll go through your SOP together, line by line. I'll show you where it loses the reader, what to cut, and what's missing. Then we'll fix it — not just feedback, actual editing. We'll work on your opening (the first three sentences determine whether the rest gets read), your narrative (connecting your background, your chosen program, and your future into one convincing arc), and your close (what a strong ending actually does).