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Ishita Dosi

Async pitch deck review

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You don't always need a live session. Sometimes you just need a sharp, experienced eye on your deck and honest feedback you can act on immediately, without the back-and-forth of finding a time that works.

Here's how it works:

  1. Book and pay
  2. Share your pitch deck
  3. Within 72 hours you receive a detailed review - I go through your deck slide by slide, commenting on what's working, what's killing investor interest, and exactly what to fix. You also receive a written summary of the top 5 priority changes to make before your next investor meeting

What I review:

  1. The opening hook - does it make an investor lean in or tune out in the first 30 seconds?
  2. Narrative flow - does the story build logically, or does it feel like disconnected slides?
  3. Market sizing - is it credible, or is it a TAM pulled from thin air?
  4. Business model clarity - can an investor understand how you make money in under 60 seconds?
  5. Team slide - are you telling the right story about why this team wins?
  6. The ask - is your raise amount, valuation framing, and use of funds investor-ready?
  7. Overall investor optics - what's the emotional impression the deck leaves?

This is a strategy and narrative review, not a design critique.

Turnaround is 72 hours from when you share the deck. If you need it faster, message me before booking and I'll let you know if I can accommodate.

If after receiving the review you want to work through the changes live together, this amount is credited toward a full pitch deck deep-dive session. You can send me a message, and I can get that set up.

1 x Async pitch deck review
$225
Total
$225
$225
Async pitch deck review with Ishita Dosi