Devang Pathak

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As someone who writes professionally and pitches, I often find a dearth of good feedback. The production houses and studios who pass on your stories rarely offer feedback which can improve a screenplay. This creates an unhelpful loop where a writer wishes to improve but is not offered enough feedback to make their story better and pitch them again.

To that end, I have been offering professional services since July. A few pointers to note:

1) The screenplay must be SWA Registered. I will not be offering feedback to a non-registered work.

2)It will be promptly deleted by me once I have offered my feedback.

3) I am going to keep a standard time of 1 week for all submissions- web series episode and feature film screenplay. This is because I will have my professional commitments that I must meet. I will not be taking more than a week- unless it's an emergency or something unavoidable for me.

4) I get really minute with my feedback. But for clarity- I will first outline my overall thoughts of the story, then there will be a page by page or dialogue/action specific notes. I may very rarely offer alternate solutions but those will be limited since that would go into the realm of writing. My focus would be to suggest a different or better route and my logic on why I think the same. You will find that the specific notes help you fix a particular portion and the overall thoughts are aimed at improving the story in general.

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