Devang Pathak

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I offer professional and descriptive feedback over email to those who wish to improve their synopsis for their feature film/web series/ short film.

The Script/Story Feedback system will work as follows:

1) I will be charging for each document of a particular story I am sent.

If you wish to send me the story, but this time revised with the feedback I gave or some other changes, then I will offer some discounted rates over mail.

2) I am going to keep a standard time of 1 week for all submissions. This is because I will have my professional commitments that I must meet. I will not be taking more than a week- unless it's an emergency or something unavoidable for me.

3) I get really minute with my feedback. But for clarity- I will first outline my overall thoughts of the story, then there will be a page by page or dialogue/action specific notes. I may very rarely offer alternate solutions but those will be limited since that would go into the realm of writing. My focus would be to suggest a different or better route and my logic on why I think the same. You will find that the specific notes help you fix a particular portion and the overall thoughts are aimed at improving the story in general.

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